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Cosey
Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 14
To., Ont, Can.

0 posted 1999-09-30 11:49 PM


I sit alone
my room feels dead
and the rain keeps pouring in my head
don't know what to do
cos i can't feel..what isn't right and isn't
real
i watch the others
like in a show
in front of my eyes
they come and go
but they don't see me
As i'm alone
It's only me...
I'm on my own..

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ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-01-28 05:18 AM


Pretty poem. It describes being alone very well. Keep up the writing
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-13 07:47 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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