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Zaleha
Junior Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 10
singapore

0 posted 1999-09-28 06:50 AM


Roses blooms in May
The stars rises on day
The stars shines down brightly
As I look out my window and dream
I smile as I think
Just standing there
Waiting for my angel to come in

As the sun goes down
I can see more stars
They are hanging around
Making no sound
I lit the candle beside my bed
Waiting for my angel to come around



[This message has been edited by Zaleha (edited 09-28-1999).]

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roxy16
Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 13
Lithia Springs,GA,U.S.A
1 posted 1999-10-03 06:04 PM


That's a beautiful poem. It's perfect. You really have a talent, hopefully it will get you somewhere in life. Thanks for the reply to my poem"My Best Friend"
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-13 07:46 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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