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Teen Poetry #1

I found love!!

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Junior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 36
Whitesboro,NY,USA

0 posted 1999-09-28 12:09 PM

you can't know what love is till you find it
you don't know what you reach for till you have it
you can't understand your wish until that wish comes true.
i never knew what love was until i found you

----short?yep. simple?uh-huh. completely and totally from my heart to the person i love, even if it's stupid.

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

1 posted 1999-09-28 04:38 PM

Short. Simple. Great. True. I agree totally with it. Especially the part that says "You can't know what love is until you find it."

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Spartacus
Junior Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 13

2 posted 1999-09-30 01:32 PM

I very much agree with the first and last lines. The poems short and sweet. Showing how people assume they understand love, but they really don't...not until they actually have true love. nice poem. A++

Spartacus

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Amor Vincit Omnia:
Love Conquers All

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-13 07:45 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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