Teen Poetry #1 |
Emotion Potion |
invertigo18 Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 53Prairieville, LA., USA |
And only angels see What the mind bereaves. Taken on up The pain floats in the sky. Fallen to the ground. A tear falls from your eye. Balanced is what we are. Kept from floating away. By the gravity of our emotions Mixed inside as secret potions. On raven's wings we carry them wary That sometimes they may get scary. Wisdom is our only ally. Knowledge is our only insight. We focus on these to get through the day. Not listening to what our emotions say. Consistently angry. Persistently loved. Our conscience is weak. And all of the above. ------------------ Luke Cakalic |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very cool! I like it a lot! I can relate to it. *Alwye- AKA- Krista Knutson* ------------------ |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
"And all of the above." That's got to be the coolest way to end a poem! written in blood before everything went black |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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