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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-09-30 10:00 PM


Rainbow hued droplets gently spiral earthbound,
Floating softly upon the vividly glittered breeze.
My mind is silent and I deeply cherish the sound,
Mild calmness quieting my tempest wrought seas.

Leaves of hunter colored velvet, silken to touch,
Carefully woven into a vivid tapestry of life.
I never knew heavenly starlight shined this much,
I never knew a thought could destroy all strife.

Creamy mists of white hover upon the silver grass,
The icy beauty shining within your sparkled eyes.
Our love brushes life upon this land so vast,
Flooding the brightened, gleaming sapphire skies.

Forever is ours for the taking upon this horizon,
Eternity is here, within the embrace of your arms.
The fire of our passion rages like the morning sun,
And when I wake from dreams, you shall keep me from harm.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
quietlydying
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the wonderful land of oz
1 posted 2002-11-01 03:01 AM


once again you really show your talent in your work.

i'm shocked to see so many zeros in teen one.  a little disheartening.



/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (11-01-2002 03:02 AM).]

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-13 07:50 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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