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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 1999-07-27 04:42 AM


Let the night ascend,
so that I may blend
Lose myself in the darkness,
that feels so much like home
The night so mysterious,
telling me it's stories
No words are said,
everything you feel, you see
Nothing is supirior
Everyone's a ghost
Maybe I'm crazy
but I swear I can hear the stars,
can feel the moon,
and consoled by the silence
Sleep,sleep is what I need
Untill the night calls again for me

© Copyright 1999 Morgana - All Rights Reserved
Local Parasite
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since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg
1 posted 2002-10-04 02:13 PM


I like the way that you wrote this.  It is very fluid and easy to read, and it sounds almost dictated in the way that you choose to present the speaker's words...

I also like the ending, "until the night calls again for me."  That's pretty neat...

Enjoyed the read.  Wonder if you'll ever get my reply.  

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

quietlydying
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the wonderful land of oz
2 posted 2002-11-01 02:59 AM


i see brian's been stalking you in the smart search.

  i'm just going through the list for familiar names [so i know they're still on pip] and i noticed he's been looking for your work.

heh.

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-13 07:49 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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