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Midnight Lady |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Let the night ascend, so that I may blend Lose myself in the darkness, that feels so much like home The night so mysterious, telling me it's stories No words are said, everything you feel, you see Nothing is supirior Everyone's a ghost Maybe I'm crazy but I swear I can hear the stars, can feel the moon, and consoled by the silence Sleep,sleep is what I need Untill the night calls again for me |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I like the way that you wrote this. It is very fluid and easy to read, and it sounds almost dictated in the way that you choose to present the speaker's words... I also like the ending, "until the night calls again for me." That's pretty neat... Enjoyed the read. Wonder if you'll ever get my reply.  Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
i see brian's been stalking you in the smart search.  i'm just going through the list for familiar names [so i know they're still on pip] and i noticed he's been looking for your work.heh. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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