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BaBy15
New Member
since 1999-09-24
Posts 1
brooklyn,NY ,USA

0 posted 1999-09-24 01:21 AM


dont know who i like
dont know who i love
dont know who i want
dont know who i dont

should i tell him the truth?
or should i just say that its all good
should i tell him its over?
or should i just let myself suffer

i miss him
he wont understand
or maybe
he still wants to hold my hand

should i keep kissing?
or think of what im missing?
i dont know what to do
should i just stay with you?

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CelticKat
Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 22
St augustine Florida
1 posted 1999-09-24 03:04 PM


OK . let him know how you feel.
Be honest.

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Act your shoe size.



Maitay
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
2 posted 1999-09-26 12:39 PM


You sound like you want to let him know how you feel, but you wanted someone to agree so that you knew that you were doing the right thing. You know what you need to do, why not give him the poem and then alaborate?? It was well writen, best of luck.

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~


Silent Silver
Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 12
AZ, USA
3 posted 1999-09-26 04:19 PM


Seems as though you are quite confused, and from one teen to another, I think you should let the one you are with right now know about your feelings for your other guy. Don't go on hurting yourself; I've been through it before, and you'll just end up in a world of hurt. Listen to your heart.
-May you satisfy your heart and love always,
SS

Mark4Him@juno.com
Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 36
Whitesboro,NY,USA
4 posted 1999-09-28 05:39 PM



You have to be honest with him,but more importantly to yourself.Be sure that you do the thing that makes you most happy,don't live your life for others.As Shakespeare said,"To thine own self be true"

Melissa

Phoebee
Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42
Peoria, AZ
5 posted 2000-07-09 07:59 PM


Tell the truth.  That is always the best way to go.  I lied and screwed up everything.  Don't make that mistake.


corey14
Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.
6 posted 2001-05-23 05:25 PM


hey im a boy and i  would want 2 no how the girl is feeling so tell him the truth
Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
7 posted 2001-08-21 10:47 PM


this was good. tell him how you feel it might turn out to be a great thing! ~Jess
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2007-11-13 07:48 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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