Teen Poetry #1 |
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chollagrl4 Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 65brick |
We're okay one minute, the next we're not. even though i give u all the love I've got. One minute, life sucks, the next its great. Sometimes u love and sometimes u hate. But i always love, always care for you. But i guess its too much, cause im always feeling blue. No one understands, no one wants to care, and all u see is the tears, on my face u see despair. But thats nothing to you, and i dont know why. am i that bad, now i wish i could fly. Fly away from you, but i must stay, cause i could not live without u in any way. |
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SWEETLADIE Junior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 11BRONX,NEW YORK,UNITED STATES |
this poem was great because it made me think a little about the realtionship i am in a little keep up the good work! |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Hey chicka I know exactly how ya feel. I once wrote a poem about that too. But I'd neva let n one read it cause I still feel the same way about him. I luv him so much and I know that he has feelings for me but I don't think his are as strong as mine. I love him and I always will. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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