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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Bite the child with spookshow teeth Mourn the child with paradox grief Kiss the child with poison lips Crush the child in your grip Adore the child with raging hate Tempt the child with surreal fate Guide the child to the light Make the child win that fight Mold the child to your glove Kill the child with your love |
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Mya15 Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 16Sunrise,Fl,33351 |
why all the morbid thoughts??? This poem kinda depressed me. I would be hurt If I knew someone felt like this toward their child. Please let me know if I'm not getting the point of this poem. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
What I mean by the poem is that parents often come on too strong, expecting their child to be their mirror.....and even though they are pushing the child out of love....it destroys the child inside.... hence "Kill the child with your love" |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
i can relate... ------------------ "If to rectify your demeanor, You must imitate another, Your philosiphy on morality Is a burden on your mentality, Your actions based on popularity, Will never fulfill you internally, Cuz the world was not blessed with equality, But rather with fake geniality. --823-- |
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