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Zippie
New Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 7
Jackson, MI USA

0 posted 1999-09-17 10:21 PM


You are there
And I am here
Sometimes I wish that you were near
To hear your voice
To see you smile
I must admit it's been awhile

I say prayers
For you each day
And hope God sends my love your way
Our memories
I keep at heart
And cherish them for what they are

I miss you
I knew I would
But I know things will work out good
Just keep the faith
In all you do
Take care babe and God Bless you

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~Christina


© Copyright 1999 Zippie - All Rights Reserved
LoveAngel2000
Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 11
Knoxville, Tenessee (home of the Inbreds)
1 posted 1999-09-19 07:53 AM


Your poem has touched me in ways undescribebly. You really have a gift and it shows through your poetry!

LOVEANGEL2000

Taeira
Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26

2 posted 1999-09-19 09:45 AM


I know that feeling all too well...to love someone u can no longer touch..whatever the reason..it hurts...and the only place u wanna be is with them..but it doesnt always work out like that..

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~live life like there's no tomorrow, because regret is the ultimate punishment~

caroline
Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218
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3 posted 1999-09-19 01:51 PM


Quite nice, Zip. Keep writing

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
4 posted 1999-09-19 03:02 PM


I can relate to your feeling......I had to go through not losing a love....but watching one i could never have....but lo and behold, i've captured it

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