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Kimberly ann Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 61 |
I won’t let a single tear drop from these eyes. No silent screams from these lips. No sharp movements from my body. No arguments in my head. No bleeding from my heart just because you left me. It was hard to see you go but no one shall know how I feel I won’t take sympathy. The sun may be out but all I see is a rain cloud over my head. But I refuse to feel this pain you gave to me. Tears fall from my eyes. Silent screams of frustration from these lips. Bleeding from my heart, just because you left me here in this world that I have yet to figure out. Rain may be falling over my head but I keep moving forward towards the sun with every step I take and every breathe I take comes a new beginning. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Kimberly, you've put a lot of thought into this "think positive" poem. It's a good philosophy to live by. You're pretty new with us, and no doubt still learning about all of the nooks & crannies PiP has to offer. You're posting a poem here in "Feelings," which is really a discussion forum. Perhaps you'd like a moderator or an administrator to move it to a poetry forum for you? Folks aren't looking here in this forum to read poetry, so you might get better feedback if we do - just a suggestion. Let us know if we can help you. Welcome to PiP, btw...  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, I agree. Kimberly, I betcha you would enjoy it in the Teen Forum. You are a teenager aren't you? They have a good group in that poetry forum. Write On !! hugs, Chris |
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