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Ringo
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0 posted 03-01-2005 06:38 AM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

Since I have hit the proverbial wall on my scribbles, I have decided that what I needed was a bit of introspection. Since XAngel came up with this template originally, and Alicat introduced me to it, I figured that I would re-do it and see what happened...
Here's the challenge:
Fill in the missing blanks of the following poem. IF you have never done it before, it is a good way to suprise yourself, and let the rest of us get to know you better. If you have, then a revisit to see where you have changed might be fun to try.

I AM

I  am (two special characteristics you have)
I wonder (something you are actually curious about)
I hear (an imaginary sound)
I see (an imaginary sight)
I want (an actual desire)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

I pretend (something you actually pretend to do)
I feel (a feeling about something imaginary)
I touch (an imaginary touch)
I worry (something that really bothers you)
I cry (something that makes you very sad)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

I understand (something you know is true)
I say (something you believe in)
I dream (something you actually dream about)
I try (something you really make an effort about)
I hope (something you actually hope for)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)


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I wear a face born in the falling rain
serenity blaze
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1 posted 03-01-2005 09:50 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Anything for me "droogie".
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum92/HTML/000522.html

It's wonderful to have you back my friend.
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2 posted 03-01-2005 10:44 PM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

Thank you for the kind words... I never realized how much I missed it until I came back (lol).
Your write was absolutely superb... as if there was ever a question.

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I wear a face born in the falling rain

littlewing
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3 posted 03-02-2005 12:33 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

There ya go, good choice, I needed this.
Thank you.
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4 posted 03-02-2005 08:17 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

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excellent Challenge Ringo, I thank you very much....
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5 posted 03-02-2005 04:34 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

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Thanks, enjoyed participating in this challenge.

Maree

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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6 posted 03-19-2005 06:48 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

This is my response to the challenge, Ringo.
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum92/HTML/001070.html

Hugs,
Ethel
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Introspection is always good...
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8 posted 03-19-2005 09:50 AM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

This challenge always amazes me. It never seems to die, and the efforts are always so amazing.
You have all done a superb job with it.
Thanks for playing.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

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9 posted 03-19-2005 11:24 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

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Forgot I was supposed to leave the url here.

AND.....we have a super pic of Ringo!!!!
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10 posted 03-19-2005 09:47 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ringo...I do hope it is ok to do an I Am for another...
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum92/HTML/001095.html
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11 posted 03-20-2005 05:50 AM       View Profile for Michelle_loves_Mike   Email Michelle_loves_Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michelle_loves_Mike

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I hope I do this cutty/pastey thing right. It's a good thing I love you mister! Make me get all thinky and such.....sakes.
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12 posted 03-20-2005 10:30 AM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

Sunshine... PLEASE do as many of these as you would like. You are talented enough to have us read them all.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

 
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