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Enchantress
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0 posted 2005-03-17 12:02 PM



I am a hopeless romantic, yet very unique
I wonder if others know how vulnerable I feel
I hear your soft whispers and know love is real.
I see moonbeams, and feel tingly, whenever we kiss
I want to live eternally in this moment of bliss.
I am a hopeless romantic, yet very unique

I pretend I am brave, though at times quite afraid
I feel your presence beside me even when we're apart
I touch the words that you've written..they come from your heart.
I worry our 'someday' may never come true
I cry for the promises not carried through.
I am a hopeless romantic, yet very unique

I understand and believe in a much higher power
I say once again I shall love you forever
I have dreams of a very successful endeavor
I try to stay positive...keep my feet on the ground
I hope a cure for Crohn's soon will be found.
I am a hopeless romantic, yet very unique.


© Copyright 2005 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-03-17 12:11 PM


YOU are beautiful Nancy...
Hugs dear.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-03-17 12:42 PM


I am a hopeless romantic, yet very unique

yes you are, indeed

Lovely and well done!

kayjay
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3 posted 2005-03-17 01:27 PM


What a charming and lovely piece of writing.  Well done.  Hugs, Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-03-17 01:28 PM


beautiful you
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-03-17 01:37 PM


Nancy,
Quite an insight into you, enjoyed.

J. K. Mitchell
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6 posted 2005-03-17 01:42 PM


I love this.  This is remarkable.
Sunshine
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7 posted 2005-03-17 01:43 PM



I'm right there with you
on those important key wishes!

Nightshade
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just out of reach
8 posted 2005-03-17 02:27 PM


Hi Teed !!  This is simply wonderful - as are you. Luv & Miss Ya!

You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow.
~Amy Lowell~

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9 posted 2005-03-17 04:53 PM


Yes Nancy, like me and others...you are, and
we are and I am...  Yuh dun gud gurl...

Dark Angel
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10 posted 2005-03-17 05:51 PM


This is enchanting..just like you Nancy

Maree

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

*Stubby*
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11 posted 2005-03-17 10:31 PM


Beautiful So very nice

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2005-03-18 12:54 PM


Yes, Dear Enchanting One, you are all that ~ and sooo much more!

And I will join you in prayer for a cure for Crohn's Disease.

Sending you loving, healing hugs,
Linda

scorpio
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right...there
13 posted 2005-03-18 08:39 AM


Tinker welcome back.  You are indeed unique. And I look forward to reading your wonderful words once again.  

believe in what your heart feels...

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
14 posted 2005-03-18 09:32 AM


Yes Nancy, you are all of those things. And, so much more. I, too, hope they find a cure.
Enchantress
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15 posted 2005-03-18 10:45 AM


Thank you all for responding.
A special thank you to Ringo for bringing this challenge back.
~Hugs & Love to you all, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

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16 posted 2005-03-18 01:19 PM


You are a remarkable woman... and I am proud to know you better. *S* This is a beautiful write! *S*

And... you do not pray alone, lady. *S*

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17 posted 2005-03-19 06:30 AM


Hello my sweet Enchanted Lady. This poem
is beautiful, just like you. I miss you, sweet lady.
I also am praying with you about the disease.
With love and hugs,
Ethel

miscellanea
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18 posted 2005-03-19 08:15 AM


Enchantress,

   As you can see by all your responses, you ARE a beautiful and unique enchantress of whom we all adore!  Your eye for beauty and smooth, unique description is truly inspiring.  

   My thoughts and prayer I send your way and upward.

             miscellanea

Enchantress
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19 posted 2005-03-19 09:12 AM


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Alicethruglass
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20 posted 2005-03-19 09:39 AM


I, too hope for a cure for Crohns...

~A~

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Saluting with misty eyes
21 posted 2005-03-19 09:46 AM


It's posts like this that make me realize just how much I have to learn about writing.
Yet another outstanding job by miss Nancy.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

jwesley
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22 posted 2005-03-19 09:56 AM


Yep on all counts me friend...thanks for sharing yourself.

j.

Susan
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walking the surreal
23 posted 2005-03-19 09:58 AM


Beautiful sharing Nancy - as you are -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

littlewing
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24 posted 2005-03-19 08:57 PM


Nancy?

I wonder if others know how vulnerable I feel

Yes, but we are all vulnerable here, it is safe, it is home.

I adored this and you.

JamesMichael
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25 posted 2005-03-19 09:25 PM


A pleasure to read...indeed...James
J.Samm
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26 posted 2005-03-20 06:44 AM


i pretend i am brave though at times quite afraid

wow,this is something i could really relate to...very well said, enchantress

Goodknight
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27 posted 2005-03-28 07:06 PM


Nancy - how wonderfully you write - I just love it - have missed your poems a whole lot - Paul
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
28 posted 2005-03-29 01:08 PM


You are a joy and ever so lovely, the one and only Enchantress!!
adagio
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29 posted 2005-04-14 12:43 PM


I am glad that I found this one today wanted to see someone else's answer to challange . liked it very much. can relate!

          adagio


ThUnDeRkYsS
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30 posted 2005-04-14 04:41 PM


You are an inspiration for us all fine lady, wonderfully written and a very enjoyable read!!

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



adagio
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Marrero, La.
31 posted 2005-04-15 12:38 PM


Just wanted to see someone else's answer to the challange.Honest ,
I thought and very enjoyable


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