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garysgirl
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0 posted 2005-03-19 06:42 AM


I AM

I am  understanding of others and hurt with them when they are hurting
I wonder, sometimes, if everyone will be okay, for real
I hear music in the air
I see us dancing to loves music
I want everyone to get along and be happy
I am understanding of others and hurt with them when they are hurting

I pretend everything is okay when in actuality it's not always
I feel that Gary's love for me will last forever and for always
I touch his heart every day, as he touches mine
I worry about other's problems as much as my own and want to fix them
I cry because I can't be with Gary and my daughter all the time
I am understanding of others and hurt with them when they are hurting

I understand more than some think I do about their problems
I say and believe there is some good in every single person
I dream about the day that Gary and I will never have to be apart again
I try to always keep a smile on my face and in my heart
I hope that everyone will stay safe and happy
I am understanding of others and hurt with them when they are hurting


My first post to this challenge in 2003: /pip/Forum80/HTML/003363.html
This is the link to the  challenge: /pip/Forum7/HTML/000645.html

© Copyright 2005 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-03-19 08:41 AM


Yes, you are all of this, and more...
You are, wonderful!

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2 posted 2005-03-19 08:50 AM


~ and those are the reasons why you are so loved!

It is sooo good to read you this mornin', you little darlin'!!!

Love you!
Linda

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3 posted 2005-03-19 08:55 AM


You have a beautiful soul Ethel.
hugs to you, Chris

You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow.
~Amy Lowell~

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4 posted 2005-03-19 09:07 AM


You are a wonderful and caring person Ethel!
Love and hugs, Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

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5 posted 2005-03-19 02:02 PM


You are... a dear... and anyone who didn't appreciate how special you are before they read this will by the time they finish. *S*
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6 posted 2005-03-19 04:04 PM


You are absolutely wonderful Ethel...

challenge well met

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

jwesley
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7 posted 2005-03-19 06:52 PM


See you in your words my friend...soulfully beautiful.

jimmy

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8 posted 2005-03-19 06:55 PM


ethel, indeed you are

good write!

Martie
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9 posted 2005-03-19 07:19 PM


Ethel

I believe you are these things....I've seen your caring sweet way in your poetry and in your replies.

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10 posted 2005-03-19 07:22 PM


One of our sweetest poets, and that shows in every word.
Magnus
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11 posted 2005-03-19 07:45 PM


Ethel,  this poem speaks greatly of a lady
with a huge heart and great compassion.

littlewing
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12 posted 2005-03-19 08:47 PM


Good God Ethel, how I wish I had half of your heart.

Just beautiful you are.


JamesMichael
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13 posted 2005-03-19 09:21 PM


Ah yes, very nice Earth Angel....James
Ericc
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14 posted 2005-03-21 07:09 PM


Excellent write!

Eric

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