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KamikazeAngel
New Member

since 2007-01-01

Posts 3

0 posted 2007-01-01 05:38 PM

If I were an angel
I'd assemble the stars in our dreamland,
intersperse them about you
to radiate your world.

Granting your every inclination
If I were an angel,
I'd imprison moonbeams
like fantastic kisses in the heavens.

And propel them toward the west
in anticipation of a soft embrace landing upon your skin,
If I were an angel
I'd hurry to your side each night.

Gazing at you in your slumber
to quieten your dreams,
and kiss away the shadows
If I were an angel.

I'd steal through your window
like moonlight across the floor,
as tender as the night breeze
to sleep in your study arms,

If I were an angel,
I'd watch over you to keep you protected,
Until the day your night falls silent
Then inhale into your infinity with you.

Mercury06
New Member

since 2006-12-28

Posts 9
Australia, QLD

1 posted 2007-01-01 07:27 PM

You are so talented! This poem creates such a romantic scence. I enjoyed the last stanza, and I think the line "Until the day your night falls silent" creates a stunning contradiction and play of words. I think your skill with language shines in this poem, and you have created a text that is as well penned as it lovely. I can't wait to see more from you.
~Merc

Jess
Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

2 posted 2007-01-01 08:11 PM

This is really very beautiful. Its so romantic and dreamy. You paint such a lovely picture...My favorite part, "I'd improson moonbeams like fantastic kisses in the heavens..." *sigh*

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-01-02 07:22 AM

beautiful

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-01-03 05:31 PM

Sounds like a nice angel to have...James

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2007-01-03 05:31 PM

Now, that would be a DEEEP breath

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2007-01-04 12:45 PM

"If I were an angel,
I'd watch over you to keep you protected,
Until the day your night falls silent
Then inhale into your infinity with you."

I think you are!
Beautiful write.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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