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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-11-16 10:15 AM




You asked
For more whispers
Of romantic notions
Passionate cries settle on ears
Soothing thoughts of these softest moments held
Quelling the need within spirits
Tender exchange of soul
For you, because
You asked.




seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-16-2006 12:01 PM).]

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Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-11-16 10:22 AM


WOW!
An early Christmas present
This is 1derful and

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Decaflame
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2 posted 2006-11-16 10:41 AM



Christmas presents
come early to some...



Lovely!


LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-11-16 11:46 AM


Quelling the need within spirits
Tender exchange of soul
For you, because
you asked

marvelous prose

a happy read

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-11-16 12:09 PM


Oh Donna, this is nicely done!
Pressie
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Oklahoma
5 posted 2006-11-16 02:05 PM


Very well done!

Omnia vincit amor

TP

The Lady
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The Southwest
6 posted 2006-11-16 02:59 PM



oh
it's just lovely
Donna

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2006-11-16 05:22 PM


Hey ya'll!! Blame Loper for this one.
your kind replies bless me, many, many thanks for the words.

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