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unicorn at silver strand
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unicorn at silver strand |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I wouldn't mind a unicorn if you wouldn't mind the hounds or the feel of a steal bars when you were the guardess pale in comparison to the sins you protected from becoming addictions to another kind of idolatry where the crime is desired more than the salvation when you were unguarded in the frenzy of your fantasy of sipping the milkman's wares before they spoiled from spill on the backside of a widow's window beachside to panting afternoons where trembling skin knows the sand will worship intentional indentations ______________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-20-2006 08:51 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The fantastic reality of real fantasy... you wind the streams well, Sir.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...thanks lady friend, just a window view of silver strand on a backroom afternoon... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderful as always  good morning |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank ya ms (grin) |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
yeah now thats some good writing there , deep and real , liked it In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Very spiffy indeed I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"in the frenzy of your fantasy of sipping the milkman's wares before they spoiled from spill" I love these lines Stranger. How DO you do it? I mean I know you do it well, but how? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Auj W, thanks so much for the read _____________ EdGrim, humble thanks amigo _____________ lady one, thanks lady friend...the words just seem to squirt onto the page sometimes..might be lack of motor control or something.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh my but now my feet are warmed by the sands of silverstrand memories.. and so, a new post for you siver stranded /pip/Forum95/HTML/001856.html |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Kacy's post sent me here to see her inspire...it would be you.  |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
nice view, dark one beLLe |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Kacy, humble thanks and yes I see your footprints in the sand ______________ ms martie, such a small world when we walk it together, thanks for the eyes ___________ bel1e one, thank you for the read and comments |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
This is flawless. I love it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sera' humble thanks lady friend |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
my mind is wandering here....and I don't think I'm in a hurry to get it back  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms cein' let it stay awhile...thanks |
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