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| Open Poetry #37 |
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Write Me A River |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Write Me A River ~*Marge Tindal*~ Write me a river that sweeps me along a river that floats me on gentle song Deny me no current in a quilling flow deliver a word-river that moves me so Swirl me in the mystique of the rhyme in your liquid ink poetically sublime Splash the words upon the barest skin then do it poet .... do it over again Ripple me melodic to the worded shore where contented I'll wait forevermore For your ship-of-words in expectation for the ride of my life in jubilation Write me a river that sweeps me along a river that floats me on gentle song Deny me no current in a quilling flow deliver a word-river that moves me so ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
How beautiful, Marge. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Lovely Marge. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is a lovely poem, Marge, and it speaks to me because this is what I've asked of my muse. Really enjoyed......jo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Made me smile. Thanks. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
If I could, I would...but I can't even seem to write me one.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm with Martie LOL gorgeous write Marge! |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
This is more than peotry...it is true art! Thanks Marge, Bubbles |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely stunning, Marge. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Marge, I was swept along with a lovely flow of images. Thank you! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Marge, you have the heart of a true poet! I hope poetic currents always keep your heart afloat...and lots of love, too. ~ Karen  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Marge, I see the words floating serenly on the bluest river. Thank you for the vision. Very imaginative. martyjo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this surely swept me along - absolutely wonderful dear Margie girl  ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Swirl me in the mystique of the rhyme in your liquid ink poetically sublime Splash the words upon the barest skin then do it poet .... do it over again this washed me away to the places you go...Margie, this was plesant, delightful and fulfilling...thank you hugs to ya for a great day |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely Marge! This piece flowed down the page just like a river of beautiful words. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow-wee! Very nice! JL |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is gorgeous -- MORE-MORE-MORE!!!! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
oh i love it, i am in heaven when i read this poem thankyou, curiouse i'm looking for you...always... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thanks for writing me just such a river!!! Beautifully expressed! The words literally flowed!  Loves 'n hugs, EO  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I thank you all SO MUCH ... when the words flow, I can only hope to catch them and share them with you~ Ed~ You asked for MORE MORE MORE ... here it is~ /pip/Forum94/HTML/002735.html Thank YOU for stirring the ink well of me~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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