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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-04-06 07:22 AM


I wonder if you will be there today
in your shimmering of satin
with the pale sky under

will you be just the sun
wearing the eyes of dark
allowing him the thrills

of your jack and jill considerations
the threesome of us
playing through water hazards

that make the day dreams more real
than a quivering hand's sleeve
will you toy with my thoughts

after such a long time
of playing under the veils
and wondering what women wonder

before they say make me do it


_______________

daark

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-04-06 08:09 AM


you are amazing!!!!

Good Morning D...sadly I heard today on the news that more storms are hitting your area...more rain...my thoughts are with you poet friend...

thank you for your morning thoughts on these blue pages...

Hugs
Lee J.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-04-06 08:14 AM


lady lee j, thanks hon

Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-04-06 08:25 AM



You always remind me
of yesterdays

ponds of water
with children laughing...

images

just east
just below
the fog.


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-04-06 09:48 AM


"after such a long time
of playing under the veils
and wondering what women wonder"

~ and you be one who apparently enjoys every moment of your research! Might I add, that you do it very well! ~If only more men would take the time to really understand the fairer sex!  Pigtails


EA
Flowers

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-04-06 10:15 AM


ms sunshine, thanks lady friend

_________

ms ea...I can't think of any kind of lovely more worthy of study..thanks ms

Martie
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6 posted 2006-04-06 11:38 AM


DS

The sky is blue above the grass here today!

Klassy Lassy
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7 posted 2006-04-06 04:39 PM


Rain or shine, Venus does adorn her satin one star at a time.  At least one of them should be perfect to wish upon.

If it rains long enough, thoughts turn to the bright waterfalls and green leaves of summer whispering their soft sparkling secrets on sun-hazed afternoons.  It's enough to make anyone daydream!





Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-04-06 04:48 PM


ms martie..thank you neighbor for the wave..waves..grin

________

ms KL, you are touching the sky aren't you...thanks ms

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