Open Poetry #37 |
Paint My Heart |
poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
5243 Paint My Heart 31 March 2006 If I could hold you heart my touch would be gentle in kind I would stretch out my arm and draw you near in a picture told Each moment would be as if breath stood still To grasp your being held close to me in love This sense of feeling the heave and lowering of your chest Of a love - an entirety to want in rest If I could hold your heart just think of it now For “I love You” Katie Marie the girl with eyes of brown “Love not sleep, lest thou come to poverty; open thine eyes, and thou shalt be satisfied with bread.” Proverbs 20: 13 KJV a poet who cares |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the girl with eyes of brown very sweet ending enjoyed M |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
only the real "Katie Marie" this works is based upon has blue-grey eyes. So goes a play on words based upon her true name a poet who cares |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful , tender thoughts expressed , I hope she has seen the poem Hope |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
There is a poem that comes before this one Ballad of Katie Marie the true "Katie Marie" is a very good friend of mine, from Ohio, USA. When I live in New Zealand. Marie is her middle name, while the poem is based upon what her true name is. Without giving too much away. a poet who cares |
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