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Open Without Closure
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Open Without Closure |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Open Without Closure Whilst thoughts collect Verses go here and there Nothing comes together My heart I need to repair Trying to fill in the blank I have empty space blues With poems incomplete The frustration continues Intervals and line breaks While still feeling despair Lacking the parts I need Poems I left up in the air Sinking upon every sigh I am open without closure No verse could illustrate My break down exposure Hope©2006 Link to the poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/98/poem_829404.html |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
empty space blues, yeah I know what those are sometimes we are left having to find closure ourselves when others can't see we need it and they can provide it for us |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Dixie ,hugs to you friend , you know where I am coming from and why it was written Hugs Hope |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
While I understand the "empty space blues" To me that is the line that does not fit But in saying that, in the absence of that statement, there would indeed be an empty space. Sure at times, we have to take the thoughts and feelings for what they are Thanks for wracking my mind to think. a poet who cares |
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