I am feverish, whoever knows,

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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2006-01-08 04:57 PM

I am feverish, whoever knows,
Those hath been in love a minute at a time-
yet not know love! Nor the agonising wait!
but in a second can devour the beating of the heart,
Ah, thou art more than just a voice-
a tyrant whom rules none other than me
if ‘twere not meant to see beyond the cage-
let me not love nor breathe nor know of heartache.

Shout! Why doth love throw up it’s arms in surrender,
It’s dagger twisted into barb-its poison rejection
Thou say we hath not seen a common match-
but our soul did seek since birth another
as engulfed in flames the victory is lost to the other,
She-carried my tears on a fingertip-
a single strength now lost upon the dryness
make thoughts not now but of yesterday!

I wonder if we never met before the beats begun,
That thee would smile to another and I watch on-
did love we wore now wear upon a memory
become the grounds we serve ‘tis pleasures curse,
Tell me where all those years went-
I remember all before but none when thee left
born invisible to the aging distance.
Thou art on my thoughts almost every time;
and now your gone the feeling grew-
beyond the feeling of a dream.

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

1 posted 2006-01-08 08:38 PM

"she carried my tears on a finger tip"

awesome....just plain awesome...

love it

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2006-01-08 10:19 PM

This is beautiful... I enjoyed it much

and then He created the horse...

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2006-01-09 06:11 PM

Gorgeous verse!

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

4 posted 2006-01-09 06:46 PM

this is very beautiful. you have remarkable talent

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-01-26 12:03 PM

"if ‘twere not meant to see beyond the cage-
let me not love nor breathe nor know of heartache."

Beautiful work.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

6 posted 2006-01-26 12:42 PM

Beautifully written! Your great grandad would be proud!

Linda

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2006-01-26 02:15 AM

lovely,

Juju

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2006-01-27 01:18 AM

did love we wore now wear upon a memory
become the grounds we serve ‘tis pleasures curse,
Tell me where all those years went-

to question love one should ask? was it love or a common task? memory plays with the mind, pulling the heart strings, only to find, if love was true, it would have stayed, for love never leaves, love never strays~
Some miss love by twelve inches, the space between the heart and the mind, what rules, the Heart or the mind? to whom do you follow? can one betray the other?Who is to lead, and who is to follow?

~ARH

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