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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2006-01-20 07:11 AM

I sat and wondered what words…what words?
And none came to be as beautiful as thee-
how can I write thy smile which lasts forever in mind
or give to others what thee hath given to me,
And I thought of wine which gets thee drunk-
then of poetry the weaker of the two
but if thou drunk enough poetry-
surely it would be the making of sense
drunk on the words from the heartfelt stranger.

So let me pour thee poetry,
And thou can pour me love-
and both shall be drunk on each other
forming our passion for all to know and see,
Stand still and the world will pass like a shadow-
but I from distance gaze shall stand still the same
and move within thy time no further away shall I be.

The eyes of others still remind me of the empty soul,
black as the darkest skies without a home-
but thee my love hath the colours of the sea
washed with a thousand more unknown to thee,
And the secret of my poetry is not unknown-
my mind is drunk on thee and I lust for more
pour more of thine kisses upon my lips-
feed me poetry, feed me poetry!
and we shall never die after we are dead.

kevinbrianwright
Junior Member

since 2006-01-19

Posts 35
NYC

1 posted 2006-01-20 06:59 PM

Interesting write..well done!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2006-01-21 05:29 AM

I just love the way you write

and then He created the horse...

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-01-26 12:07 PM

"So let me pour thee poetry,
And thou can pour me love-
and both shall be drunk on each other'

Lovely write.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2006-01-26 12:35 PM

Your "wonderings" are always fascinating!

"feed me poetry, feed me poetry!
and we shall never die after we are dead."

~ Love those closing lines!

EA

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2006-01-26 02:13 AM

I liked this alot.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2006-01-27 01:10 AM

Poetry feeds the soul and the heart, oh, but love, love is the fountain of youth,
love heals the whole body~ so pour to quinch the thirst, the hunger, so that I shall never hunger again.

Poetry is food for thoughts, love for the mind, I shall die, with empty stomach but words of heavenly beauty my mind will contain, my ears have heard heaven sing, so sweet a poem that has never been spoken across precious lips, and never will be heard, ever again~

~ARH

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