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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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In In velvet air amongst the trees Where only shadows moved with ease Showed shafts of light in misty lies Lighting dew drops like fireflies And silence reined the forest keep The world was in the last of sleep A beauteous moments glowing gloss Before the chaos turned to dross I seek these moments garments place The in-between the holes of lace And make myself a pyramid To place my bones and rest amid To stretch my rubber band to pull And store the wool of three bags full To place my soul in Shangri-la To reach in light speed my own star If this sounds sort of vague to you Then stay your dreams and sleep on through |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
morning sir. many thoughts to ponder here  My spirit will rise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In velvet air amongst the trees Where only shadows moved with ease Showed shafts of light in misty lies Lighting dew drops like fireflies ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ oh me darlin poet man...nothing you say is vague... (some just cant see the forest for the trees)... all that you rhyme is written on time-- tis all poetry in motion...just look at that verse above.   To stretch my rubber band to pull And store the wool of three bags full and that couplet is made of gold! yer so cool. *ww*    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES You are a welcome visitor. JM, You light my dreams. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You dear poet, are the light of the world thank you for this |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! This wonderful poem brought to life the vacation we took this year...We went camping in the mountains and I would get up at 6:00 a.m. just to sit outside and feel the wonderful silence around us...At night we would lay out on our sleeping bags and gaze at the wonder of the stars...I have been gazing at the stars with my grandchildren since we have been home but the magic and silence that surrounded us in the mountains is not there....this poem brings it all to life for me...Thank you....*big hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ But a bit on the dim side. LOL Startime55 Sweet comment, thank you. |
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