Open Poetry #35 |
Men cant fly |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Men cant fly I still hear the echo of airplanes They fly far above our reach One can only cover their ears -Men cant fly- A sense of fear or humility Comes from knowing there are bigger things Which we can’t hide from -They always find us- Sometimes the thought of losing control Or even worse to know we never had it Can trespass the thin line of insanity -Who are we really?- -Juju I have internet access again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JuJu~ Oh ... I just adore this thought - 'Sometimes the thought of losing control Or even worse to know we never had it Can trespass the thin line of insanity' Oh yes ... this thin line, I have known~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We are earthbound in body, thanks to God we can fly high in spirit! Very good thoughts, well rendered. Love, Margherita welcome back! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very enjoyable read...thank you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Juju, I'm glad you got access again it's good to read you again too keep on writing! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I am glad you enjoyed this poem. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I know how not having access can feel...you sure came back with a bang...Wonderful poem...*big hugs* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very profound, Juju.....quite liked this one! ....jo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
very impressed, excellent work here |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
well I am glad you like this poem. -juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
great poem...enjoyed *s Maureen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am woman...watch me fly? LOL, a good challenge write. Thanks for getting this idea off the ground. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I am glad you enjoyed my work. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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