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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2005-06-30 12:46 PM

I don’t think I ever told you
how my heart would race
before seeing you
the giddy anticipation
and always
the hope
that this time
you’d notice me

I don’t think I ever told you
how my heart would stutter
and stumble
when your eyes
found mine
and how they would make me ache
for things I had no names for yet
but wanted
only with you...

I don’t think I ever told you
how my heart came undone
every time you’ve ever said
my name...
And how still
the sound of your voice
wrecks me
reduces me
to a doe eyed
awkward mess
wishing only
that you loved me
as much as I love you.....

~SEA~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2005-06-30 12:48 PM

I always wish that...James

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-06-30 01:12 AM

You nailed it, SEA....yep, that's love! Much enjoyed!

.....jo

Tndeer1
Member

since 2005-06-24

Posts 87
TN. USA

3 posted 2005-06-30 02:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful SEA,
I've only been to that place once, as most I guess. I also agree "that is Love"
Wonderful reading.
God Bless!

Tndeer1

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2005-06-30 07:11 AM

Susan , Loving feelings beautifully expressed

Hope

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2005-06-30 07:22 AM

somebody is lucky

cool stuff lady

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-06-30 08:07 AM

perhaps you could start telling him...little by little...just a tad at a time...but then, you know what they say, actions speak much louder then words?

Hugs to you and he

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2005-06-30 09:48 AM

"the sound of your voice
wrecks me"

and the smell. The smell of him makes me dizzy. The memory of that smell...well, you said it.

well done.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2005-06-30 10:04 AM

This is truly love. Wonderfully written Susan.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2005-06-30 10:07 AM

SEA
Those are only the signs, you also have to read the small print. A lovely write.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2005-06-30 10:53 AM

"I don’t think I ever told you
how my heart would stutter
and stumble
when your eyes
found mine"

Love these feelings..
you said it perfectly!
Hugs~Nancy

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

11 posted 2005-06-30 11:10 AM

I love this feeling.....hopefully (but not in any hurry) I will feel this again.

This is excellent..

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2005-07-02 01:58 AM

thank you all so much for your wonderful replies!

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

13 posted 2005-07-03 12:03 PM

This was good; and yes you said it perfectly!

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

14 posted 2005-07-03 02:52 PM

Right on!

Excellently done!

Eric

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

15 posted 2005-07-03 07:22 PM

Beautiful!

Eric

StarryEyed3
Member

since 2005-06-26

Posts 58
bostonia

16 posted 2005-09-15 11:27 PM

so perfect. well written.

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..." -death cab

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