Open Poetry #35 |
...how my heart.... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I don’t think I ever told you how my heart would race before seeing you the giddy anticipation and always the hope that this time you’d notice me I don’t think I ever told you how my heart would stutter and stumble when your eyes found mine and how they would make me ache for things I had no names for yet but wanted only with you... I don’t think I ever told you how my heart came undone every time you’ve ever said my name... And how still the sound of your voice wrecks me reduces me to a doe eyed awkward mess wishing only that you loved me as much as I love you..... ~SEA~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I always wish that...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You nailed it, SEA....yep, that's love! Much enjoyed! .....jo |
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Tndeer1 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 87TN. USA |
Absolutely beautiful SEA, I've only been to that place once, as most I guess. I also agree "that is Love" Wonderful reading. God Bless! Tndeer1 |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Susan , Loving feelings beautifully expressed Hope |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
somebody is lucky cool stuff lady |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
perhaps you could start telling him...little by little...just a tad at a time...but then, you know what they say, actions speak much louder then words? Hugs to you and he |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"the sound of your voice wrecks me" and the smell. The smell of him makes me dizzy. The memory of that smell...well, you said it. well done. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This is truly love. Wonderfully written Susan. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA Those are only the signs, you also have to read the small print. A lovely write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I don’t think I ever told you how my heart would stutter and stumble when your eyes found mine" Love these feelings.. you said it perfectly! Hugs~Nancy |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
I love this feeling.....hopefully (but not in any hurry) I will feel this again. This is excellent.. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so much for your wonderful replies! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was good; and yes you said it perfectly! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Right on! Excellently done! Eric |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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StarryEyed3 Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 58bostonia |
so perfect. well written. "and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been |
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