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Open Poetry #34
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-02-09 07:35 PM


It was so good
to sleep
with her beside,

the darkness warm.

The red sun,
not wanting to leave
his blue love,

slowly...
rises.
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-02-09 07:54 PM


The imagery
is beautiful, John.

Thank you.
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-02-09 08:43 PM

Excellent response to the challenge, this really captures it perfectly.  Well done.
iliana
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3 posted 2005-02-09 09:19 PM

This is lovely; very visual.  
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-02-11 02:53 AM

nice
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-23 06:20 PM

vrey romantic.

beautiful.
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