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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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At dinner—after years apart— He looks right And she looks left |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think it's amazing that they both still have an appetite m'self.  You do this well, John. And I must add, it sure sounds like you've been there. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oft have seen this, as I'd waitressed a good part of my life...and hoped I'd never be them...sad, isn't it.... Well done |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Spot on but I think you forgot the cartel, especially one that attacks a woman who is seen to no longer have a man and is a competitor and who then fails to allow someone to arrange their life, as the other person feels it should be. Dave |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
they sat side by side. I am laughing. why bother. old emotion was again ignited. then why title love instead of "cold" cold dinner colder face coldest eyes. |
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