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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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It's always been the other side of me that is often the most difficult to see I'm not an illusion I am real, I have hopes I continue to feel. I don't wear masks I won't play games You can't know me if you only know me by name. I've shown you my trust but still, your heart fears it hurts me inside I still feel your tears.... I don't like lies, I'd rather know the truth... what say you? {Tritt/Mellencamp} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-04-2004 02:20 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I've shown you my trust but still, your heart fears it hurts me inside I still feel your tears...." Beautiful...bittersweet write Donna. Hugs~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm not an illusion I am real, I have hopes I continue to feel. I don't wear masks I won't play games and the best way to be...I'd pick you to play on my team any day... Sad write, but one thing for certain...you don't and won't ever leave any stone unturned... I hope this person learns to trust you hugs |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
just keep shining....  and one day that person will see the light |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Sensitive people are just so, just like this. Well done, Donna. Congratulations on your 8,000th Post! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've shown you my trust but still, your heart fears it hurts me inside I still feel your tears.... ================================== yessss....exactly..... lovely lovely poetess Donna Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna...You always write with such honesty of feeling. Congratulations on 8000...for all the poetry and replies...you are appreciated!  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Let's hope this person is listening and learns what is really there. Nice honest write and done so in a wonderful flow of words and heart. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Congratulations!!! . . . . bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is absolutely beautiful... and goes right to the heart. *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know Mom loves this...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and you are beautiful on the inside and on the out! You have the gift of being able to relate what you are feeling to others. Donna, I believe you to be the sort of person whom everyone would trust ~ and love.  Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your all so great!  and, these have been a wonderful 8000 and I am looking forward to more. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Enjoyed this INside and OUt! Congratulations on passing 8,000, Donna. I can't imagine ever doing that! Great job. miscellanea |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
I still feel your tears.... **beautifully expressed** **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This is so good - so well expressed - so much said - Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey M, BBGL and Susan, thanks so much for stopping in and leaving your thoughts. Peace to all. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AhGentleLadyOfGreatSpirit~ How much I enjoy reading you 'inside out'~ I know that there is great beauty within you that you share and share through your poetic pennings~ I thank you for that~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
there is such deep feeling behind your words. enjoyed this. |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
deep and meaningful...i like the minimalist style. it works for you. in the end it's not just you with your memories and your scars, fall on me if you ever forget how beautiful you are. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"I'm not an illusion I am real, I have hopes" I know how this feels... powerful write... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am lucky to be among you all. Thanks! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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