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The Amber in Sleep (Masquerade Challenge)
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The Amber in Sleep (Masquerade Challenge) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Tonight there is amber in my sleep all that is art bares its-self upon my soul This quiet insanity that creeps in and smooths over dark mirrors I find myself wishing the moon to be pure white again when it is full of wonder upon this mire of splendor seeking such windows and lovers of light their skin laced by lilacs They must have a word for it? a dusting of palms when she, beneath you holds no boundaries cover thy eyes when keeping her still seeing as she does through her finger of shadows ~~*~~ Read between the lines look deep into each word and you will understand the depth of my soul (GE) ~~**~~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (10-25-2004 11:34 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
a beautiful write L, i'll save my guess for a little later on |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Geez...leave it to a challenge to bring forth all of the magic of this place... for which we have Wranx to thank... definitely female... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely fabulous Martieism? Beautiful! Wait! Or is it ... rwood, Kaoru, IndigoEve, Alicia, babygirlwlove, darn this is a tough one. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
not sure who but this is a gorgeous write hmmm, need to read it out loud perhaps |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hmmm...I am going to guess this is our Marge... Something in the lilacs, moons and finger of shadows... Great write. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I find myself wishing the moon to be pure white again when it is full of wonder upon this mire of splendor seeking such windows and lovers of light" I think you underestimated your ability to write this one Loopy. Ya done good...  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
beautiful, stunning......and im stumped! who is it?  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well... I guess Susan (the other one).. But I am terrible at this game... Wonderful write. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am stumped to m'friend although Sharons guess of our missing friend Regina does come to mind. Regardless, this is a beautiful penning L~ Well done. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Done good? I'll say! Though, I'm not at all sure who you done. A beauty, Lauren! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
beautiful Lauren, hmmm thinking who could it be? Maree and I am haunted |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Lauren, this was beautiful..soft, alluring, mysterious...and all those great descriptive words which speak...."GREAT WRITE" Enjoyed....smiles and hugs |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
well my first guess was littlewing, but reading it again i have to say i see a little bit of gemjop in there.. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
it does sound like gem but still, I am stumped on this one . . . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ok, you haven't given any hints...but after reading again.. I'm guessing our one and only Maree?? The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ok, this is my perception of our littlewing..when checking the archives, this is what I read and saw from her beauty..forgive me Sue...  ~~*~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and she was my next guess! I thought the dark mirrors was a hint at our Maree... sigh...but yes..this is Suzie and you have done her a beautiful justice L~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, it IS Suzie. I came back and read this again, and felt those littlewings in each line. Nicely done! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I thought littlewing also... nicely done M |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sue did cross my mind yes  Wonderful Lauren. and I am haunted |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG Lauren! you do me great justice here, I do not write this well and am soooo honored you did this! *smiling huge here*  Thank YOU thank you so much I like how you write me better! |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Oh, wow. Of all your poems I've read, I can never decide which is my favorite, because every single on of them astounds me...they're all my favorites. This one is yet another beautiful piece that warms my soul. Thank you. "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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