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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-10-27 07:41 AM

A State of Lime

I stared into a sky of lime
That seemed to touch forever’s time
It passed beyond horizons frail
And beckoned me a phantoms trail

It picked me up a feathers breeze
Tossed me in a state of tease
Floated me a mental vie
Into the lime within the sky

I knew it was a fantasy
A moment of serenity
For I was held in gentle grace
A lullaby of mental space

And as I felt the wind of free
Surcease filled every trace of me
And brine dissolved a sea of fears
That washed away those nettle tears

Yet in that moment heaven sent
There came a twinge of discontent.

Sunshine

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1 posted 2004-10-27 07:45 AM

This brought back a tender memory Sy...
and isn't it amazing, that even when
we are at our most serene, there is always
a twinge of something else...

I guess that makes us human.

Cpat Hair

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2 posted 2004-10-27 08:01 AM

hmmm. usually like a bit of Jose with my lime... but this.. does me fine..

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-10-27 09:07 AM

there you are, you stinker, I almost missed your words today, and I was a mess!

anyway, wiping off all my sytears....

You know, we always fear the unknown, or what we don't understand, until it's past
and then realize, there was nothing to fear at all.

or at least, those are the thoughts your words inspired this morn.

Thank you

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-10-27 09:13 AM

"Yet in that moment heaven sent
There came a twinge of discontent."

Isn't that always the way Sy!
Much enjoyed this mornings offering.
Time for tea? I'll pour.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2004-10-27 09:16 AM

ah yes, even when all seems well, sometimes we still have that feeling of something underlying. well done sighmaster...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-10-27 10:02 AM

I for one had way too much Jose' in the past...

But I loved this Sy!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-10-27 10:10 AM

Ah, yes. It be so true. Ofttimes there be sour with the sweet ~ but I happen to love limes!

With God as my witness, I have been sucking on one while at my computer. I rolled it back and forth on my desk and then punctured it (I think I heard it scream!!!)~ and then I squeezed its tartness into my sometimes overly sugar-coated mouth! lol

Life can often be a candy-coated lime! ~ Mind you, I prefer candied apples!

Sweet and sour kisses,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2004-10-27 10:31 AM

Sunshine
Yes it does.

Cpat
Your right, just a little twist of jose.

LeeJ
Morning sweet, have no fear sy is here.

Nancy
You pour Ill drink.

Gentle
Then you know the feeling.

Susan
Thank you dear.

Earth Angel
Sweet and sour kisses are my favourite.
Hugs back.

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2004-10-27 11:35 AM

And as I felt the wind of free
Surcease filled every trace of me
And brine dissolved a sea of fears
That washed away those nettle tears

Yet in that moment heaven sent
There came a twinge of discontent.
===================================

I used to call myself the queen of discontent...but then I saw the ocean and realized that water held my inner peace ... and so whenever I feel that dicontent creeping in...I head for the creek, or river, or lake....
and...your beaches of understand.

*winkiewinkie*

Ink runs from the corners of my mouth.
There is no happiness like mine ...
I've been eating poetry.

Mark Strand

Martie

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10 posted 2004-10-27 11:50 AM

Sy

"Yet in that moment heaven sent
There came a twinge of discontent."

I think we humans become upset when things are going to well...and do something to change it. Why is that? You got me thinking with this one, my friend.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2004-10-27 02:07 PM

JM,
This dragon is waggin his tail, so nice to see you reply.
Winkiewinkie

Martie
Thank you sweety.

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