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Open Poetry #34

Owen

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-10-22 08:57 PM

Owen

The flowers
in the meadow...
shimmer
like soft tunes
in a gentle wind.

The clear sky
is pale and cool.

A gallant horse,
unsaddled,
grazes peacefully in the pasture.

How beautiful
the red rust
on the once bright armor...

that lies beside
the Spring green field.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-10-22 09:09 PM

and you, sir, are very good at this.

You leave just the right amount of space between the lines for thought.

I enjoyed this very much.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2004-10-22 09:24 PM

I like your style.

Juju

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-10-22 09:25 PM

Very much enjoyed this one.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-10-22 09:36 PM

Huan Yi

This poem reminds me of a beautiful place in the Sierra Nevadas called the Owen's Valley. Lovely!

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

5 posted 2004-10-22 10:49 PM

What a picture!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-10-22 10:53 PM

very descriptive! I like it!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

7 posted 2007-05-14 11:34 PM

a painting and a picture and a image and a poem.

beautiful all the way.

love this.

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