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brian sites
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0 posted 2004-10-05 12:38 PM



passing the pupils
        over  ourbitrary
  Simbulls
                    is IN!
    inlearning
inself
     the topography of egoligarchy

thatis swat-eye
                   went
                              OUT
into
      the        eeeeeee
                        vening
      for

to gather all
the senses   out
side my eeeego

            and e
     voke

   what I could not
            feel

with In

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-10-05 01:01 AM


smile...and I just argued a fact with a teacher too.

I said the word "flapcantate" was indeed a word, albeit it could be found in only the directory of demonology, under a subtitled text of incantation regarding witches who specialize in BIRDS and resulting sympathetic ornithological proceedings.

I knew you'd understand.

That's cause you onvoke m'lovely.

All over me too.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-10-05 02:14 AM


LOL at Karen's dictionery challenge.
And Bri, glad to see you emoting and evoking,
you always offer fresh goggle-views.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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3 posted 2004-10-05 06:36 AM


A great write Brian, enjoyed the stirring eeeemotions.

me thinks I shall keep this one.

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

littlewing
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4 posted 2004-10-05 08:29 AM


So good to see you here, Bri-bro
and this reminded me of that Joycean mind crunch you guys have done before . . . I pictured you outside with a smoke while thinking this.

Missed you and your writing.

BP

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2004-10-05 12:16 PM


and e
     voke

   what I could not
            feel

with In
=========================
yesssss...
thats it exactly.
Love the clever word play in this poet sir.
good to see you here Bri-guy

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue


Martie
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6 posted 2004-10-05 10:17 PM


Brian

"to gather all
the senses   out
side my eeeego

            and e
     voke

   what I could not
            feel

with In"

I'm going to try that right away...I am!  It's good to see you.  

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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7 posted 2004-10-05 11:30 PM


Well...Just don't turn no ankles!

Y'hear!

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-10-06 04:47 AM


nice to read you again
Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2004-10-07 02:29 AM


time for an encore for the onvoke
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