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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-05 08:00 AM

thirty eight
was recommended
the color was perfect
the scent
like a lady
with spring in her hair

my mouth was alone there
sipping the ends
flavor seams soft
can't get enough
almost a panting sound
as my hands said there is more

thirty-one
more subtle in presentation
afternoon vintage
when the sky is warm
and tickle sounds
make the flavor playful

again a lady
but this one is naughty
has a nibble bite back
that sticks to the tongue
makes memories
like freckles in the sun

then there was forty-one
two handfuls of pleasure
more than just a mouthful
a throat full with more
turn out the lights
and close the door

savor of sin flavor
let it run down the chin
wear it as cologne
nectar of seduction
just whispering shimmers
then moaning glisten

when bourban is a woman
_____________

Dark

scribblenote: at the distillerys there are batches of bourbon, they vary in flavor..needless to say 41 just seemed to hit the spot

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-10-05 08:07 AM

Whew...but hey, we're living in a free world, and this is still the best country in the world to live in? Right?

Hiya and Good morning kiddo...it is another blessing to wake up and read your poem...as well as others here...still another day to unfold for all of us...wishing you many surprises

Thank you, be safe and have a wonderful day

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-10-05 08:21 AM

Dark,
I hear and read the beating of the drums.
LOL Enjoyed

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2004-10-05 09:04 AM

mmm yummyyyyyy...

but then, you could make
changing a flat tire sound sexy...

K

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2004-10-05 09:17 AM

goodness, remind me I want to go have a drink with you sometime

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-10-05 09:49 AM

~laughing at Kahlil's response

M

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-10-05 10:01 AM

Ah, good vintage flavor pours from your words and stirs liquid savors.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2004-10-05 10:31 AM

savor of sin flavor
let it run down the chin
wear it as cologne
nectar of seduction
just whispering shimmers
then moaning glisten

when bourban is a woman
=============================

yowzers... ya almost make me wish I liked the stuff.

but this moth is a rasberry tea sipper.
I find I am loopy enough without being under the influence..lmao

makes memories
like freckles in the sun

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

8 posted 2004-10-05 10:41 AM

Enjoyed a bunch... Here you had me thinking of Baskins Ice Cream! Yumyum! Very creative!
miscellanea

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-10-07 02:38 AM

whew! yes!

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