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Editing Reality- 20 or less (kaile's strikethrough challenge)
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Editing Reality- 20 or less (kaile's strikethrough challenge) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Editing Reality By Larry Chadwick Because we can't forget I September 20, 2004 kaile's link: strikethrough effect If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Larry this is touching...my heart goes out to you  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Thank you Dixie for informing me of that challenge. You would think I'd ahve confirmed its functionality but I am up before the birds...what was it thinking?  And thank you for your understanding too.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C I have three children and they are my everything. Understood |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 I had a bit of a revision myself, but can't imagine the pain of this edit. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Interesting Dave |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Oh Larry, this is a heart wrenching edit... I can't even imagine  prayers always there Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Larry, I cannot imagine what pain you have gone through...  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Larry |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Larry... and then He created the horse... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, Aha, a morsel of the man. Thanks for that and your understanding. Sharon, Thank you dear friend. It wasn't a pity party actually. I saw kaile's challenge and it was the first thing in my head, so I played with it. Dave, Ignore me, I'm just playing with a concept. Thanks. Alyssa, Thank you young lady! We were at a 50th Wedding Anniversary party tonight and when people start discussing family...well you get the picture. But it is another chance to honor her memory. Alli, Though I have learned it is imagineable. And thank you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martie, Perfect, thanks. Rhonda, That seems twice as perfect! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Wow! What a touching bit of work that really touched me. This was probably the most touching read I've seen here. And, in so few words. You have achieved mastery! It seems you have taught us all something profound tonight. My warmest wishes for you, Kevin |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 a heart felt edit |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kevin, Your response certainly overwhelms me. Thank you. Kacy, Thanks sweetie! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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