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Cattail’s Song
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Cattail’s Song |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Cattail’s Song in awe I saw the symphony beauty common among muck nestled safely in its own row sitting tall on the edge of waiting each struggling to be first chair in a musical arrangement for reeds all around hushed and leaned in just to hear the stirring song of orchestrated compact brown puffs that the wind communicated by breath I thought it would have a hollow sound but sighs always did move me it twinkled like harmonic brass made by the inverted wind chimes I had to touch the music hold the sound within my hands and when I did, the notes exploded and carried through the air just some words cut out |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ron…I call your cattail…and raise you one…your turn…giggle |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady A delightful breath of air. Enjoyed |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
In a word . . . WOW! Very nice. e |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... now.. I posted one and raise your cattail by two..  |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Challenges are wonderful... especially for the readers! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is stunning! *S* Excellent work! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wow -- you get better and better! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
very moving .... and beautiful! is it MISStro ... either way, well conducted!! |
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