Sighting a flight of vision on a Sun

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Open Poetry #33

Sighting a flight of vision on a Sun

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-09-08 01:26 PM

Sighting a flight of vision on a Sun
Flying those wings to wing over flights
Of fancy glinting proud heads
Muscles powering images of potency
To imprint
Life of life

Faint ideas fainting in the mind
Of dreams you fainted behind
Flying onto ideas that would change the world
Echoing dreams of flight
To echo
Thoughts of thoughts

Hovering in mid-thought
You hover over decisions
Indecision in the challenge
To challenge to challenge
Supported by many
You dream of flying alone

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2004-09-08 01:39 PM

Doesn't everyone, at least once, wish that very dream? Or dream it true?

Fly high, Dave...it's good to see you in the blue pages again.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2004-09-08 01:46 PM

Great write Dave!

Eric

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-09-08 02:11 PM

Thanks

I needed to take a break but hopefully the words are more balanced and the attitude better.

Many Thanks

Dave

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