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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 At times there are questions going around in the head of someone Questions of what one will do or of what one may have already done Then there may be some consequences that may or may not have to be faced Will others understand her feelings and actions she wonders if she will be disgraced She wonders if life is worth all this if there is any reason for living All her life it seems turns out the same even though she keeps living and giving The feeling of alone sometimes overwhelms her as she feels this darkness all around She wonders where are all of her friends when she needs them where can they be found She knows that she will soon overcome though the questions are there in her mind For she always has through all her life when peace of mind she eventually seems to find For though she has all these questions going over and all around in her head She will sooner or later feel joy as to her own inner peace she is led |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ethel, you so well described the feelings I've had sometimes in the past. The picture was perfect, and I was glad the end of the poem showed strength.  ...jo |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Great picture and universal issues! So good to read your work again, I've been away too long. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful just beautiful. A great read. The picture is beautiful too and fits with the words. :-) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ethel, a somehow sad write from you, but it happens to all of us at times and you share your thoughts and insights so very beautifully. A tender hug for you, generous heart. I'll be back in July. Love and Light. Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you could have very well written this about me |
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stottbear94 Junior Member
since 2003-10-10
Posts 11Living in Daddy's Eyes |
great poem,it made me think of my nanna *.* o Keep writing |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
...it is the gate of many choices, through it I hear voices of what was and could have been... Thank you! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So wise...and so beautiful. Thanks! Eric |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel I know this searching well...you described it beautifully! |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
beautiful!!!!!! very much enjoyed THANK-YOU |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this feeling m'friend.... sad..and filled with longing. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Another touching poem straight from your heart Ethel. Hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you all so very much for understanding. I appreciated all you friends so much.   |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She wonders if life is worth all this if there is any reason for living All her life it seems turns out the same even though she keeps living and giving The feeling of alone sometimes overwhelms her as she feels this darkness all around She wonders where are all of her friends when she needs them where can they be found Oh, lady... feelings that seem indescribable just needed your pen to paint their portrait. *S* Excellent write!!! And I love the picture... though it's going to show just how ancient I am, it reminds me of the old Star Trek episode "City on the Edge of Forever"... which, comes to think of it... is appropriate for our mental lost times. *S* |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Ethel wonderfully expressed , take it from one who understands , I always have questions going around in my head too Hope |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The feeling of alone sometimes overwhelms her as she feels this darkness all around Oh Ethel, you wrote exactly what I am feeling and I had thought to write something, but this says what I needed to... so I will let the writing to you until the darkness isn't so overwhelming. Hugs you.... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Yeah life is worth it. Not always sure why, but in the end it is over come... and usually you can smile. Sometimes it's a tear stained sigh, but no matter what, it's worth it. Hope things are well for you...Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That peace can be such a tenuous construction at times that the slightest touch in the wrong place can crash it down....or we may cross to a better place before it collapses us into the ravine. May it always be so for you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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