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It Remains.....
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It Remains..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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It remains~ untamed.... ten thousand oceans, of ache unending waves of want enduring the crush of hushed emotion It remains~ echoes through my soul reverberating reverence quivering upon lips a whisper of your name It remains~ embedded essence emanating passion in timeless reminisce soft sigh remembrance never forgotten, that kiss It remains~ adoration.... lifetimes, blissfully lost heaven is in your eyes It remains~ ever constant, ebb and flow destined devotion always know my love for you, It remains~ ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! YES!! YES!! Welcome home!! And, what a beautiful write you brought with you! So good to read you again Susan! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan.........So good to see you! Love is like that...the way you describe...wonderful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SEA, your expression here was really well done. Great poem!  jo |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautifully expressed , great to be reading your wonderful poetry again Hope |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, Sea, I have missed your gentle words so much. Welcome home! hugs, Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Okay little friendie gal .... this is absolutely silken~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It remains that you are still one of my favored poets... Welcome home, Susan... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful write! It flows so smoothly, it positively rolls off the tongue. Good to read you again, SEA!  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
 missed you! (but don't worry, my aim's improving!) Hope all is well in SEAland. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your love, and your poetry, is as constant and strong as the SEA...  Congratulations on 16,000 posts, Sweet SEA! Your poetry ebbs and flows like you yourself graciously do! Congratulatory hugs, EA ( That's SEA minus the S! lol) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Passionate...one of my favorites...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
stunning.....and congrats on 16,000 there is such peace within this...  ~~**~~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So beautifully expressed SEA. Congrats on 16,000 Maree  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ten thousand oceans, of ache unending waves of want ~~~~~~~~~~~ It remains~ embedded essence emanating ================================ oceans, ache, alliterations... Im moth giddy!!!  very, very cool write Sea-girlie. congrats on your milestone...so good to see you back in the blue. Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, you guys are wonderful...thank you so much for the great replies....my muse has been gone for a while now, and I for one, hope he sticks around and Kissy Face.... missed you tooand Janet, those alliterations were all for you!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! In she floats so softly on a sea of love and hope, gotta love it! Nice to see you Susan, you are missed. Life sure has a way of getting in our way doesn't it Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
so softly written, just gorgeous |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Oh Susie...I feel the same about you too!....Oh, this wasn't about me?...Oh well, as long as it wasn't written to Balladeer I can accept the disappointment...nice write you good looking little doll you!!! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sea, I enjoyed the grace of your poem. Excellent. Sade |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"It Remains" Great title to a great poem. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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