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What Is Love?
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What Is Love? |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Love is the hand of the welcoming soul, pressed on the window of a train that stops briefly at any station, without fear of darkness or cold. ©2004 by icebox |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. a few words to explain a lot. nicely done sir.. may all the hands pressed to the wondow..leave imprints on your soul.. and peace in you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so very true... and simplified *s M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love doesn't fear...it is natural and pink, with great thoughts of today. Beautiful...I loved this |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
^*~Without fear of darkness or cold~*^ I loved this piece it was lovely. I love the idea of love pressing up against the window of a train, like parting lovers, what beautiful imagery. ^*~Kimberley~*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*drifting off in thought* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
one of the best descriptions I've ever read thank you, for sharing this piece of your heart and mind |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
a train indeed . . . still, by any other name, a risk we are all driven to undertake |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*smiling into your kind eyes at this beautiful piece* 
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox This makes me smile.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
What a comforting feeling this poem creates. Wonderful, Icebox!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Excellent definition! And, well penned! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Nicely put Icebox. Maree  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Thank you all for taking the time to read my poem and for your kind comments. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
That was realy cool ice , lol i linked over from feelings ,ahh good definition JW |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
glad i got to read this leaves me awestruck |
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