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Kahlil
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0 posted 2004-03-07 02:34 PM


there is a place
deep in Your heart
that you made just for me
if you are still
and seek that space
you’ll know what came to be

promises pledged
choices we made
never ceasing the bitter quest
it wasn’t Time
that we be Two
and God knew what was best

there is a place
deep in My heart
where you will always be
i won’t forget
as i let go
the love He let me see

understanding this
     i am upheld
          within the all
               of knowing        

© Copyright 2004 Kahlil - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-03-07 02:41 PM


K, there is strength and wisdom in your words. You have learned and gathered pearls along your path. God bless you and may your future be filled with every happiness.

Warm hugs & smiles,
EA

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2 posted 2004-03-07 03:02 PM


very touching...very
Grover
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3 posted 2004-03-07 03:14 PM


Loving... nice write! Grover.
Margherita
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4 posted 2004-03-07 05:15 PM


So soft and loving.
Enjoyed reading.
Love, Margherita

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Gaia
5 posted 2004-03-07 06:25 PM


perhaps that jewel will still shine for you some day
hello, from my cloud to yours

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2004-03-07 06:29 PM


Kahlil
Good write, enjoyed the read.

Ericc
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7 posted 2004-03-07 06:33 PM


Wow...!!!

Eric

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
8 posted 2004-03-07 09:24 PM


thank you for sharing this little slice of wisdom
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2004-03-07 09:30 PM


This is a wonderful way to look at the situation.
Well said.
ugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2004-03-08 01:26 AM


Love the sentiment and unconditional acceptance,
where in the heart just knows.

Beautiful poetry, Kahlil~

Kahlil
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11 posted 2004-03-08 01:33 AM


Thank you so much, everyone!  
You've made my heart very happy.  
~K~

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