Open Poetry #31 |
beyond Valentines |
S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
beyond Valentines I see you in black between the white lines of a long night ride - a surface that I glide and in the ink that spatters here onto waiting blank pages - a fire that rages I search for you in this pixel array of an energized view - the two dimensions of you and reach for the unknown depths of your sweet-water well - a long thirst I will quell © 021504 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Kool write, my friend ... really enjoyed the read. jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned and much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
SAG Softly romantic, this. Enjoyed! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh this is nice! ...a dancing love across the binary code... very much enjoyed this |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
S Arthur Grey Excellent, enjoyed the read. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, this was certainly woven by a poet's loom! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lucky one you wrote this for |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Stir come to me this night and I shall stir you one step closer to liquid dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SArthurGrey~ Oh ... this is rich~ Following OneSlick's footprints is a good thing to do~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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