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tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-05-19 09:56 PM

I am myself.
Made up of beauty and trust.
I hold a story.
That no one else knows.

I am a rebel.
Made up of breaking rules and curfew.
I hold an adventure.
That no one else appreciates.

I am a friend.
Made up of honesty and hugs.
I hold a loving heart.
That every one takes for granted.

I am a map.
Made up of several different cities and states.
I hold a destiny.
That no one else can have.

I am a diva.
Made up of high heels and gaudy jewelry.
I hold my own sense of fashion.
That no one else understands.

love will make you beautiful

youcan'tseeme
Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 88

1 posted 2005-05-19 10:56 PM

It's interesting and entertaining to hear the pieces of yourself

Thanks for posting

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2005-05-19 11:57 PM

This is rather ironic, because I was just considering writing a poem like this. Too bad you beat me to it. Oh well, I'm just glad it was done well. I like the idea, obviously, but I also like the execution. This is really great, though I do think the ending a bit abrupt. I was half expecting more.

-Rich

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

3 posted 2005-06-28 05:11 PM

you go girl...i like this write.

shara

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

4 posted 2005-06-28 11:45 PM

thanks for the comments.
rich, go ahead and write your own version. I would love to see it.

love will make you beautiful

spaz02
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 74
USA

5 posted 2005-06-29 08:56 PM

i really like this i think alotta people are like this...lol..its gr8....!

* shining star*
Member

since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

6 posted 2005-06-29 11:40 PM

I think this poem is awesome. You described yourself in a beautiful way.

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