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Our Brother's Keeper
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Our Brother's Keeper |
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Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
Wide-eyed with feet in false worlds the sheep pray for the sheep herd. The shepherd preys for flocks; a collared god who baits and hounds with bread and book; with trap and crook. He tuts at ticks and crosses forms. Insanity: a cage to hold the weak of will and fleet of foot, where hope is lost as surely as redemption is a priest to pain and path from hell. My keeper and my brother are the same both deal in madness and with death. |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
You really ARE good and faster than Superman! "a collared god who baits and hounds with bread and book; with trap and crook. He tuts at ticks and crosses forms." |
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firestorm Member
since 2008-02-26
Posts 109 |
amazing how fine the line is sometimes |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
You, Grinch, always write something good and very good!!! and rich, and rich between the lines. enjoyed the read. why posted in Dark? Tomtoo |
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Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
Thanks for the replies. Tomtoo, I was rebelling against the direction that CA has taken and the ruthless oppression of the Moderators in that forum. Actually that’s not true, this may explain the reason. /pip/Forum84/HTML/003732.html |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
JenniferMaxwell's poem are beautiful too. I shall take time to chew it. Very good. And you two write in similar styles if you don't mind i saying this. Thank you, Grinch!! |
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