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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-23 08:25 AM

            Spun from desire, heart and mind
            released upon a souls whim
            networks of wires on imaginations ride
            where one's falling is
            personified

            through branches of winter trees
            bared by timeless ends
            threads of romance woven
            suffocates and strengthens

            stagnant air fills im with
            longing and dreams
            lofting the unaware
            the body unseen

            now taken, by surprise
            presenting as a gift
            by this surge of passion
            in its dormancy time
            with words a drift

            but only a season, these
            starcrossed tides
            cresting unlived dreams
            where the sightless confides

             with unmet eyes
             tired, unread
             can only sumise
             and be put to bed

             morning stars split
             as dews are wept
             on shattered branches
             neatly kept

             wondering if the night magic
             was just wishful thinking
             or an empty promise
             a whim gone a stray

             and sinking

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-11-23 08:44 AM

inkedgoddess
Congrads to you both a good write and a good ead

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-11-23 09:08 AM

YES! and I really liked these lines very much!

morning stars split
             as dews are wept
             on shattered branches
             neatly kept

Well done, passionate poets.

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

3 posted 2003-11-23 09:52 AM

This reads almost like a spell -- Yes, I'll call it an afterspell. You two blend like gin and vermouth.

~~J

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-11-23 10:10 AM

I like your threads...and love the new picture of you

hugs
M

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-11-23 11:16 AM

the pleasure was mine, to write with a master poet

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-11-23 11:40 AM

Exceptional write.
Love, Margherita

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-11-23 11:41 AM

nice read

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2003-11-23 04:55 PM

Excellent write... you blend your voices beautifully! *S*

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2003-11-23 05:13 PM

An excellent write, you two.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2003-11-23 09:04 PM

Michele - you're writings become better and better, and this duet shows it. Nice write you two...

BC

PseudoPoet
Junior Member

since 2003-11-23

Posts 18

11 posted 2003-11-23 09:59 PM

Amazing write. Truely enjoyed.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2003-11-23 10:04 PM

Well done to the both of ya, and of course
you will have to follow this with another...
right?????????

Excellent blend of talents..

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2003-11-24 06:54 AM

thanks guys for reading and it was nice to work with craig on this, truly a pleasure

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

14 posted 2003-11-24 07:26 AM

Thanks, one and all, for your read and kind words.
          It wasn't very hard to write with Michele and
         would recommend everyone to give her a whirl!
          She is quite light on her feet!

        Gin and vermouth .... with a splash of pearl onions!!!

            Thank you, goddess, for the opportunity.

[This message has been edited by ctowen (11-24-2003 07:27 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2003-11-24 12:55 PM

wonderfuly done!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

16 posted 2003-11-24 10:48 PM

ET TU DIXEA!

thank you for your
passionate
words

*S

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2003-12-01 06:59 PM

This is positively WONDERFUL ~

Magnificent blend of poetic pens~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

18 posted 2003-12-01 07:03 PM

thanks marge for bringing us up again,
he is the man

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2003-12-02 03:45 AM

perfect!

the ant
Junior Member

since 2003-11-30

Posts 18
ca, usa

20 posted 2003-12-02 03:49 AM

Brilliant.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

21 posted 2003-12-02 04:54 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love the gentle beauty soothing in this, sweet friends, there certainly is something special about the night and it is always open to ones own interpretation in love! (big angel group hug) God Bless You Both, sweet friends, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Michele and Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

22 posted 2003-12-10 09:14 AM

ahh so true so true
the both of you sing nicely together
*smile* have penned this perfectly

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

23 posted 2003-12-17 03:18 PM

Really nice!

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