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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-11-20 10:16 AM

Midnight oil smolders
A drift of flame, held
Nearing my palm, that spark

Of verbal stimulation, a burn
Not of fire, but

The inherent rush of
Heart - pang heard
Echoing in the dark, while

Meandearing through pages, hemmed
Of cypress, tales forlorn
Never knowing exactly where
One line starts and end begins, he
Constructs lifetimes, captured
As words, hiding beneath the underbrush
Casting spell of break until
Yesterday has dissipated

[This message has been edited by littlewing (11-20-2003 10:30 AM).]

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2003-11-20 11:34 AM

Thank you Susie, I love you.

You have always seen more here on the river, than I've been aware of. (and I'm but scant feet from it)

I'm touched, flattered, honored.

"In looking Northward, I see a light"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-11-20 12:19 PM

Gawd Sue...this is SO fantastic!!
And just look at him....he loves it..and you.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-20 01:31 PM

touching and beautiful

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2003-11-20 01:33 PM

wonderful

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-11-20 01:47 PM

Superb craft here LW....excellently done.
enjoyed this read.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2003-11-20 01:58 PM

this is really wonderful....

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2003-11-20 02:58 PM

beautiful!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2003-11-20 03:24 PM

beautifully written, a wonder you are.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-11-20 04:25 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, he is such a wonderful storyteller and truly has the beauty of poetry bubbling in his veins always! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2003-11-20 05:41 PM

You know - I think love gets one in touch with the heart, soul and reason for being on this earth more than anything. It appears you are there, and this was just another to the pile of wonderful poetry you are pumping out from a place few of us get to ever go, and only dream about.

It suits you!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2003-11-20 06:24 PM

Sue, smiling at you and enjoying the love that is in the air! Wonderful write, and challenge conquered! Hugs you sweetie you!!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2003-11-21 12:16 PM

Sue?...you have outdone yourself here...
Of course...considering your inspiration,
that's no surprise...smile

Truly, though...this is absolutely beautiful

Love it, sis...
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

13 posted 2003-11-21 12:25 PM

very
very

nice

you captured his faraway
dogwalking
smokingthoughts
on a mistymorning
reveriewalk
perfectly

and other things

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-11-21 01:04 AM

Just perfect, Sue.
You are really good at these.
And, you do know your Ed, don't you?

Hugs

Ethel

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

15 posted 2003-11-21 02:58 PM

Lemongrass
Is that fresh scent of all
That is beautifully spread like smiles
That create an afterglow in the
Little centre of the beating heart
Ever so fervently as if
Wishing good times never end
In so much as prayers
None so sincerely recited as a
Grand dance in the first summer rain

.....

regards to you Sue... and the pleasure of reading your words is all mine...

Sudhir

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

16 posted 2003-11-21 03:30 PM

so wonderfully done

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

17 posted 2003-11-21 03:44 PM

Beautiful,excellent, and wonderful.

Crystal

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

18 posted 2003-11-21 09:03 PM

Sue, you are amazing and this is incredible.

Hugs and luvs, Marti

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