Open Poetry #29 |
Speech (Wranx's Masquerade Challenge) |
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
How does one say isleofview? such words seem hollow even pinging echo like stone dropped for distance traveled d o w n well(ing) within HOME |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"How does one say isleofview? such words seem hollow even pinging echo like stone dropped for distance traveled d o w n well(ing) within HOME" Sue?...I love this...my favorite part is the whole of it...smile Challenge very well met, me sis... When the power of love overcomes the |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
very, very cool |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You just reset my compass. Thank you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
oooh yeah ..sigh |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
pout I wanted to do him first! giggle... he's got this language all his own, doesn't he? and it always made sense to me. and looks like I pay the price for being late again...sigh. Back to square for one for me! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent, Sue. As elusive as he is as a writer, I do believe you caught him! |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I told you this would be an easy one, Sue. You chose one of the most blatantly obvious styles. Although by easy, I mean easy to guess, I don't mean to undermine the accomplishment here. Notice how nobody's even bothering to say this guy's name? They don't have to. Nice work, babe. Faith is a fine invention |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Challenge well met Sue, you captured this writer well. LP, exactly, he has a style all of his own and how lucky for us that he does. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes, a unique style.. well done... good work Sue |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Bri will be flattered by this offering Susie. You have written him quite nicely. Oh! and Susie? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the form of this so much, sweet friend, this reminded me a bit of some of my style too, yay, I love the pinging echo of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
when karen said I wanted to do him first i was thinking something else but then remembered this isnt the mature forum. challenge well met |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you everyone, OMG this was so hard I never imagined . . but mann was happy you guys could see what I was attempting to do here Bri? I hope you like, I tried *smile* Thanks guys and Ed? Thanks for the challenge allowed me to read a lot of fine poetry I have missed xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Such a cool poem...I loved it! Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is a neat challenge. I love the way he writes, and you did it very well!! Hugs Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
once again clueless as to whom u write of, i really outta get out more and expand my horizons on pips i guess, but you write with beautfy nevertheless, some understood, just dont know of whom u speak..... |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
how wonderful! you travel a special horizon. Rf |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Challenge well met Sue! You nailed him from the get go. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
wish I had written this |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you everyone so so much Bri ahahaha your a funny guy but thank you, am honored you like truly honored I tried not to offend, really I did you were tough to follow there *smile* This was so much fun and a thank you to Ed for allowing me to see through another's eyes . . . xxoo |
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