Open Poetry #29 |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Folded first the spark within like death before rebirth stretches, bends, and travels still the journey to a flame. Not born into awareness on the right side of the street the magic of a mind brings close and very personal the true meaning of a life. Suddenly a rumble, truth gone before insight, and afraid the spark trembles fearful lest it rain the pain and grief of yesterday upon its infancy. But suffer say the old, swallow tears until you age, and feel inside the ache of spark turned into ash before, long before, you stand an awesome flame. And in the twilight time remember there is night when sparks from ash arise and unfold into the universe the deep unconscious mind to burn, and burn, through time and space truth, wishes, hopes, and dreams. I feed a spark attention, fan with imaginings, and wait a silent spectator to the awesome power of mind able, if disposed, to move the glass of time close and very personal one last and final time. Helen / 15 November 2003 |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
I beg to differ.... do not suffer or put up with old time tears. Do not choose that path you feel near. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Sometimes we have to suffer in order to truly appreciate what will some day be. If one can't accept that graciously, we can make ourselves very unhappy. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ My goodness ... this is just gorgeous~ 'And in the twilight time remember there is night when sparks from ash arise and unfold into the universe the deep unconscious mind to burn, and burn, through time and space truth, wishes, hopes, and dreams' I just love the all of this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is very heartfelt poetry, sweet friend, you always "unfold" such wrapped blessings, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully thought-provoking |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Not born into awareness on the right side of the street the magic of a mind brings close and very personal the true meaning of a life. Dear Helen, you give me pause, time and time again. Thank you so much for all your good thoughts! |
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