Open Poetry #29 |
Feelings........Whispers |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
~*~ Feelings And emotions When coming from the heart Should be handled with tender care Being careful to not cause someone pain Or long-lasting hurtful heartaches Causing the person scars With slow healing Feelings Whispers Of our two hearts Speaking to each other Sounding clearly through the distance Heard through the rustle of a gentle breeze And when we are close together We can speak without words Two hearts of love Whispers ~*~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-04-2003 01:05 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely said |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Words spoken from the heart. Lovely they are. Love, Terri~ |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I loved this... I loved your format... I loved the feeling in this And I loved the way you incorporated the music.... I love Kenny G!!!! And I learned how to make the music play on its own... didn't know that was possible on the blue ..... always thought I had to provide a link... thank you!!!!! Wonderful poem! p.s. It's too bad that your background doesn't show up in here... there are some limits... used to be able to do that in a table... but I think Ron turned that function of html off... too much bandwidth to carry... pages loaded too slowly.... but that red writing would have looked perfect on the black bordered by the red roses.... had to go look at the file on your website to see it.... {snicker} yes, I am a sneak... Sherry [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (11-02-2003 03:25 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely Ethel !! Enjoyed this. Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ethel: My God yes so beautiful the silence is: And when we are close together We can speak without words feels like home *smile* I love this LittleOne xxoo > [This message has been edited by littlewing (11-02-2003 10:14 AM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lady, all I have to say is WOW, your poetry is getting absolutely beautiful, and look at you all fancy with music and all. Good on you! Loved this one Ethel. Try to make time to listen to |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, feelings should always be handled with loving care as they are what blanket love and ones heart and whispers help melt ones heart! (kiss on cheek) I just love the music in this, sweet friend, I have always wanted to put music in my posts but I never understood how to do so, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are the love fairie, dear Ethel. This is so beautiful. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, You are a whisper. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Ethel. Very much enjoyed!! WOW!! You're magic!! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, thank you very much. I'm glad that you like it. . Terri, thank you. I really appreciate your saying that. . LOL Sherry...I'm a sneak too. Remember when I asked you a long time ago how you got the midi on your poem? Well, I learned how to put it on my pages at poetrypoem.com that way. Then I noticed someone there had the background sound with out the Crescendo player showing. I kept checking and looking for places to learn how to do it. This is the first one that I got on here. And, I tried to fix a birthday song for suthern in Announcements, but couldn't. So, it may work sometimes and not at other times. Maybe it is magic, huh?? LOL Thanks for liking it all. . . I appreciate all of you. Hugs Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, I'm so glad that you like it. Thank you very much!! . Thank you, LittleOne. Yep, you understood what I wrote before, but now that you're finally "home"....you and your Ed are also living all this, just as my Gary and I are. Isn't being in love absolutely glorious? . . I appreciate ya'll so much Hugs Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Sharon for that WOW!! That means a lot to me. Yeah, I surprised myself with the music on here. LOL It may be the last time I can get it to work on these pages, though. LOL I surely couldn't get it to work for the Happy Birthday song for suthern. By the way, the link you left in Announcements is where I got the birthday midi from. That's a good site. I found it with Google. Thanks for liking it sweet lady. . . Noah, you always understand what I'm trying to say to Gary in my poems. He always knows, too. I thank you for saying such nice things to me and my Gary. I'm glad too that you like the poem. And the music, like I said above, I may never get it to go on here again. LOL Thanks, again. . . Thank you so very much, Margherita... I like that..the "love fairie".... It's good to see you here. I've missed you. I hope all is well with you. . . I appreciate you all Hugs to each one of you Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I'm so glad that you like it. That makes me feel good. Thank you. .. Awwww, Seymour...that's so swet to say!! Thank you so much!! . . Nancy Lee, thank you for the WOW, too!! Ya'll really are too nice!! But I sure do appreciate it. Yep, getting the music to work on here does really feel like magic. LOL . . Hugs to each of you Hugs Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so lovely, dear lady... your words touched my heart... and this morning, I got to hear the music. *S* Beautiful presentation! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Whispers Of our two hearts Speaking to each other Sounding clearly through the distance Heard through the rustle of a gentle breeze And when we are close together We can speak without words Two hearts of love Whispers Wow...what a lovely vision made within the hearts of two lovers...very much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
suthern, I'm so glad that you liked it, and that you could hear the music this morning. Thanks for your support, my friend. Hugs Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-03-2003 12:32 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you very much, Lee. I'm really glad that you liked it. I appreciate that. Hugs Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a pleasant surprise to hear the music start to play as I began reading your tender words of love. Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ethel, a beautiful and tender expression. and I love the title, something about those two words.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel...Very beautiful in every way! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sigh~ I love how you write of love and desire....so very stunning....heart hugsss Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
aww this is beautiful Ethel. and I love the email about the ghosts hehe and I was listening to this funny rock song and sudenly I started hearing this piano-like music and then realized it was yours heh... What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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