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Four Triolets For Passion’s Poets
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Four Triolets For Passion’s Poets |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Mists It took a moment to see through the mist, Forcing me then to open ev’ry door ~ As a shadow left on me one lone kiss; It took a moment to see through the mist. T’was then I knew, that poetry exists, As one would find when tramping high, cold moors. It took a moment to see through the mist, Forcing me then to open ev’ry door. ~*~ Doors Each door then opened upon a new view Even rooms with windows that lead to stars One, then another, vast vistas so true Each door then opened upon a new view ~ And I, a writer, stand in awe, subdued, Watching captains and kings, poets from afar Each door then opened upon a new view, Even rooms with windows that lead to stars. ~*~ Stars To pluck a pure star, to give, then, to you, Not cold, but bright, like a very small sun. Spotting them through mists, counting them in dew To pluck a pure star, to give just to you To know you’ve a friend in skies of dark blue There are so many, and I am but one To pluck a pure star, to give just to you, Not cold, but bright, like a very small sun. ~*~ Sun In rondo of tune, sailing round our sun I leave you the mists, great doors, and pure stars For a poet’s writing is never done In rondo of tune, sailing round our sun That you might now know, we have just begun For within poetry we hide our scars ~ In rondo of tune, sailing round our sun I leave you the mists, great doors, and pure stars ~*~ To all the Poets at Passions ~ Never quit writing! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-30-2003 08:43 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And, don't you ever stop writing dear lady! These are beautiful!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Karilea~This was beautiful... Susan |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...Thank you for the priceless gift of such words of you, and for friendship!  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
In the glow of the moon I shall quill you words soon to express all my depths of lingering feelings sad happy and mostly for all to delight or share tears wonderful penning "K"  [This message has been edited by QjQ (09-30-2003 08:56 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Came back to say.... CONGRATULATIONS ON 40,000 Posts!!!  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"I leave you the mists, great doors, and pure stars" and to all of that I must add you leave us enthralled... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Glad I took the time to "pop into Pip" this evening. Lovely Karilea & congrats!! hugs to you, Chris  Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How can we dear lady.....You feed our fires and fill our inkwells.... You lay upon our hands...most gently...our quill.....and whisper a word or two within an ear as we dream... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
A four leaf clover, I found. Lucky me to read this one! Whoah...you knocked me off the chair with this quadruple play! Fours all around? 40,000 posts, 4 poems in one post. This is AMAZING! Hmmm...Can you tell how much I love this? Congrats on hitting the big four-oh! Patricia |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Kari... Congrats and Thank You for the inspiration!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - somehow I'll find a way to keep writing forever... BC |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karilea You have encouraged and inspired me (and so many others) since the very first day I came to PIP. You have done so much for me and I wouldn't know how to begin to thank you. I was so very moved by your stunning words and I felt very emotional as I read them. I speak for many when I say that you would have to be the heart and soul of this warm and cosy place we call Passions. "Happiness is something that comes into our lives through doors we don't even remember leaving open" Take care my friend Sue P.S. Congratulations on your 40,000th post, such a marvellous achievement that is to be applauded. I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (09-30-2003 11:56 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
How lovely on the mountaintops and in the valleys are your words. Congratulations on 40,000 Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, you know that I love these triolets. An congratulations on 40,000 posts!!!!  Hugs to you Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Congatulations on 40,000 golden posts and I love these beautiful triolets, sweet friend, we write because these things among many others natural in beauty exist, and when melody exists, I'll never stop writing! (big hugggsssssss) Yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Don't ever stop m'friend, this is a beautiful blend of triolets. and Thank you Sunshineygirl.... Congrats on 40,000.  Maree keeping this. fate is not just |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So today 4 is our lucky number  You do poetry as grand as you give of your self and time here. Lovely, creative offering to mark your milestone poetess Kari! Shine on me sunny-girl.  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
This was so great Karilea! You give so much of yourself to so many! Congratulations on 40,000 posts!! Wowie Wow!!!! Thanks for always being there, for all of us! You are a real treasure! Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (10-01-2003 08:31 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karilea, ok now since I have been here I have maybe tossed away some 80 pens or so . . . there goes another one . . . (half of them had your name on it too) what a beautiful sentiment and triolets you do amaze me writing? is this what we are doing here? I thought I was just thinking out loud *smile* xxoo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
This would make a beautiful opening for the next poet's book, Karilea...if we have a vote eventually please repost this. and Thank you... hugsss M |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well, this is a beautiful trip through poetic inspirations. You have a way of making one feel at ease when exposing some of those hidden scars...... Very nicely done....I know your poetic works will never be done.... Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done K... there are many types of doors and many people to open them..or show them to you and let you open them.. poets seem to point them out.. and perhaps help us understand what may lie behind them... but it is always up to you whether or not you do... so... this speaks of the writer as much as the ones who open or show us doors..and the doors themselves.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Congrats on your milestone Karilea and what a gem to celebrate it. words that open many doors, and many hearts will be filled with warmth, at least it warmth mine Thank you for sharing your bright words with us....and ok I know, I haven´t wrote much lately but still feel me a member of Passions. Charisma |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm not much for words today so I will use everyone else's above here... thank you for you Karilea |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
enchanting!!! I wish someone would write about me like that ;-} thank you Peace, Joe |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Special Triolet Reading For Sunshine's 40,000th Posting Day by Mysteria  Ahem, ahem ... A triolet, a triolet, I don't get it but I'll get it yet! Looks way to hard, way to hard, I'll just stay in my backyard. You do with ease, oh such ease, Each is always sure to please. As you can see, can you see? I did 4 triolets my way for thee Now stop that! Stop that Sunshine!  What? what? 3 lines sounded like a triolet to me? (Trio - 3 - get it?) Congratulations Kiddo ~ Enjoy This Day! [This message has been edited by Mysteria (10-01-2003 02:59 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
your gift...tis such a beautiful thing. you and the poem! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karilea...You have really graced us with that magic from your pin. Each one of these are great, together they are SUPER. Thanks for showing us how greatness is written. You make it look so easy ...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Karilea, again and again, from the height of 40000 posts - wow!!! - you shower us with your beauty. Thank you from my heart for all the gifts you share. My head is on a spin .... 40000 40000 40000 incredible! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
These are beautiful, Karilea... in both sentiment and verse. Congratulations on your milestone. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Dear Lady Karilea, it is with such honor I read this and say thank you to a very expressive and magnificent poet. To pluck a pure star, to give just to you, Not cold, but bright, like a very small sun. A beautiful gift that I know we all accept with grateful hearts. Huggles, Marti P.S. My friend from KCMO is coming East in mid-October. Please come along. Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Sissie, you done good...in fact..very good...very gentle smile |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Glorious Orb of Radiant Light! My admiration for you as a poet--and a person!--are beyond words. These triolets are truly keepsake poems.  Thank you for all that you do--and all that you are!  Love & Sunlight, Linda |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
these are so very lovely, Passions would never be the same without your Grace....Congrats on 40, 000 hugsssss Lauren~ There's a song inside my soul |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved this |
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